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My life isn't really that bland,
And its not that I don't understand.

But

I would like to stay by the window to sit and sigh,
Awaiting for the moment when you would cross my eye.

I would know what it feels like to be cuddled or kissed,
to be longed for by someone else, to be wanted, to be missed.

To be held longingly like never before,
To feel everything and want nothing more.

To be comforted when the world is rotten,
And to know what its like to never be forgotten.
©2009-2010 ~billy-quicksilver
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:icondecarabia69:
Sad poem and it speaks for so many people I know.

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You ain't so bad your self.
I see a resemblace of H.R. Giger as well as R.S Connett
Peter S Sibrin
:iconbilly-quicksilver:
Poems work best when they encompass the masses :) then everyone understands that they are not alone in the feeling

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- Jill
:icondecarabia69:
Yes, that might be true in most instances, but I've often found poetry that addresses the masses to often be trite. Rod McKuen's work is poetry for the masses and his shit makes me want to vomit!

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You ain't so bad your self.
I see a resemblace of H.R. Giger as well as R.S Connett
Peter S Sibrin
:iconbilly-quicksilver:
I have not heard of him but i'm guessing i shouldn't go reading his work :D Well i guess it depends on what kind of topic the poem is upholding and how it addressed. and the poet his/her self that always plays a major part in how the poems going to go :P

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- Jill
:icondecarabia69:
Well, here's a sampling of his work, and coincidently enough, the music that accompanies it on this website is equally trite and boring. Rod McKuen is to poetry what romance novels are to literature.

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You ain't so bad your self.
I see a resemblace of H.R. Giger as well as R.S Connett
Peter S Sibrin
:iconbilly-quicksilver:
Lol I just read some of his stuff~ and frankly i found it ... urm... trying to hard? and a tad ... awkward i suppose. But I like romance Novels! Sure ~ they arent really literature but they are fun to read.

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- Jill
:iconillusionarymaya:
woah..so deep..O.o the detail is truly amazing..and how it speaks for itself is so..wow. it'd be nice to have that though..:XD:

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Don't think about jokes...just say it
:iconbilly-quicksilver:
>.< thanks it would be nice to have that wouldn't it ;P maun if wishes where horses beggars would be riding.

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- Jill
:iconillusionarymaya:
yeah...it would..but then there are loads of guys out there that are...T_T...:D hahahaha :XD: possibly but sadly there aren't things like that... well there's a small possibility

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Don't think about jokes...just say it

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