The music plays a beat,
step by step we move our feet.
beat by beat we step along,
head's a buzzing, i know this song.
You move gently,
for someone who claims not to dance.
I still can't believe,
the moment you stopped,
and looked me in the eye.
You stretched out your hand,
i gave you mine,
a simple whisper,
- all that was needed,
said you were mine,
never believed,
a single sentence could stop all time.
"dance with me"
Mumbled it really,
command more than a question.
What else could I do?
How could you know I was so in love with you?
Step by step, we move our feet,
Scurrying along, moving to the beat.
My heart's in time with yours,
More feelings than I could ever cause.
Music flows, continues to play,
As the two of us,
in a crowded room,
Alone,
Dance the night away.













Comments
awesome, I could never explain a single moment so well, your words allow the reader to see exactly what you see. I love it. i also love the author's comment.
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thanks! i thought the second stanza is kinda iffy. but i'm going to change that a tad.
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that's so funny and sad at the same time.
i like.
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